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Back from the Dead by ~elixirphoenix:iconelixirphoenix:

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If I came back from the dead
Would you go back with me
Would you go back with me even
If you had another
I
Dream of you
As
You
Dream of me
I want you with me
As you want me with you
So who do you choose
Your new lover
Or me
©2008-2009 ~elixirphoenix
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Submitted: April 14, 2008
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This is based off an idea (this is the really simple explanation) where one of a couple dies, the other gets a boyfriend/girlfriend, and then the one who died comes back from the dead. This poem isn't related to that, since that idea deals with it actually happening and this poem deals with "what if".
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~tu2:icontu2: Apr 14, 2008, 11:15:29 PM
simple, but very attracting *i think that's da right work 2 use*

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~elixirphoenix:iconelixirphoenix: Apr 15, 2008, 7:57:54 AM
Thanks:)

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"If the whole world had stood between us, we must have met; if we had been born in different ages, we could not have been sundered!"
-Nathaniel Hawthorne to Sophia, his wife

Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."
-from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe
~DevilRoz:iconDevilRoz: Apr 18, 2008, 11:40:53 PM
Reminds me of Inkspell... Dustfinger left to that other world without actually wanting to... He had a wife... He comes back and finds she had had a second husband, but he died... I wonder what would have happened if he (the second husband) hadn't died...?

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~elixirphoenix:iconelixirphoenix: Apr 19, 2008, 10:24:57 AM
That raises a good question...what do you think?

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"If the whole world had stood between us, we must have met; if we had been born in different ages, we could not have been sundered!"
-Nathaniel Hawthorne to Sophia, his wife

Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."
-from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe
~DevilRoz:iconDevilRoz: Apr 20, 2008, 1:46:43 AM
I think... he would have gone crazy... and killed Mo, Resa, and their daughter, Meggie! Maybe even Elinor? o-O;;;

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~*If I had an imaginary friend, it would be proving imaginary friends were dumb.*~
=star-blazer:iconstar-blazer: Jun 29, 2008, 10:27:27 AM
Awesome^^
This was very well written^^
It actually reminds me a lot of the novel I wrote- with the couple pairings. However, the story was a little bit different with who paired with who, but it still brought the thought to me.
Great job^^

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~elixirphoenix:iconelixirphoenix: Jun 29, 2008, 4:59:06 PM
Thanks n.n

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"If the whole world had stood between us, we must have met; if we had been born in different ages, we could not have been sundered!"
-Nathaniel Hawthorne to Sophia, his wife

Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."
-from "The Raven" by Edgar Allan Poe
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